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When My Life Changed Ch. 9: In Photo Memory.

 

 

Rain walked out of the hospital. Taking the killers hoody out of BEN's arms, she wrapped it around him to keep him warm in the cold winter night. As she walked home, she looked down at BEN, who had been sleeping peacefully, despite having the snow fall on his face, he was tired enough to sleep through it.

She sighed. ".......please don't be upset.......when you awaken....." She said in a quiet voice, trying her best not to wake him up.

When she finally got to the house, she walked in and set BEN on the couch still wrapped up in Jeff's hoody. "Sleep well..." She said, curling up like a dog on the other side of the couch, and fell asleep.

When she awoke the next morning, BEN wasn't there. Only Jeff's hoody was left laid open on the couch. Worried, she ran up the stairs and stopped at the door to Jeff and BEN's room. The door was wide open. Looking slightly around the edge of the door, she looked around the room until her eyes caught sight of the cyber ghost, who was looking at the stack of old photos on the bed that was once Jeff's.

He sat there, motionless as tears fell from his eyes.........but he was smiling. Rain watch silently, making sure BEN didn't see her.

"Oh Jeff, you were always the funny one, everyday, finding new ways to making us laugh. Despite you being a psychotic serial killer, you always had a way of making us happy." He said, smiling as he looked at the pictures. "I'm so sorry........for chasing you. And I hope you know, I'll miss you so much....."

He set down the photos and started to cry again.

Rain couldn't find words, it was all to hard to watch. ".......w-why do your words.......h-have to be so sad!! Why is it when you cry........I feel l-like it's the saddest thing I ever s-seen!!" She said, falling to her knees, crying so hard, you would think that she had just watch someone die right in front of her.

BEN helped Rain up and hugged her. "Having lost the one thing I held so close. Thats what makes my words so sad." He said as they both sat up on his bed. "I just miss him so much......"

"I know, I miss him too. He was like family to me. Ever since I died, you guys were all I had. Now you, are all I have left." She said still crying. BEN put his hand on her shoulder and gave a sad smile. Then he looked up at the sky from the window.

The room was dead quiet, until BEN broke the silence.

 

"I always needed time on my own."


"I never thought I'd, need you there when I cry."


"And the days feel like years when I'm alone, and the bed where you lie, is made up on your side."


"When you walk away, I count the steps that you take."


"Do you see how much I need you right now!?"


"When your gone, the pieces of my heart are missing you."


"When your gone, the face I came to know is missing too."


"When your gone, the words I need to hear, to always get me through the day, and make it OK."


"I miss yoooooooooou..."

 

 

Rain almost broke down in tears again. Not once, had she ever heard BEN sing before, but to hear it for the first time at the right moment, made her take it to heart.

BEN got up and walked back down the stairs leaving Rain up in the room. He turned to walk into the kitchen and.............blood.........everywhere...........was the first thing he saw. It was such a hard thing to look at, so he didn't clean it up, he just left it all there. "God......" he said, walking over to the couch. Picking up Jeff's hoody and sitting down, he watched Rain slowly make her way down the stairs.

"Dear lord, BEN.......how are we ever gonna move on? Rain asked. "Honestly, Rain........I don't know if I can.......ever move on......"

YAY!!! ^^ Ch. 9 :)

Will they ever move on? :(
Let me tell you something, they MIGHT not have to......
Ps. ((you are totaly AWESOME if you can tell me what song, BEN, is singing!!)) ready.......set.........GO!!!!


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:iconbendrownedplz: BEN DROWNED (c) Jedusable/Creepypasta
Rain (c) :iconsonamyfangirl6637:
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Chapter 10 [link]
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:iconyugiohfangirl2015:
When your gone by avril lavigne
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yes yes
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YuGiOhfangirl2015 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
I looked it up on YouTube 
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:iconyugiohfangirl2015:
YuGiOhfangirl2015 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Ok
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Delaware1002 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
This is chaper 9. There are 17 chapters in all. If Jeff isn't alive in the end someone is gonna die.
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Now why would I kill off Jeff? :0
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capybarasandquokkas Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IM CRYING CAUSE IVE BEEN REREADING THIS STORY FOR HOURS AND I CRY EVERY TIME WHEN BEN SINGS LIKE I PLAY THE SONG ALONG WITH IT AND OMF
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awww ; 3; .....
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Fluttershyisbest1932 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
uuuuuuuuuaaaAAAAAA!!! ALL THESE FEELS!!!!!!
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Sowwy ; 3;
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Fluttershyisbest1932 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
EEPPP!!! DON'T BE!! YOU…responded…to.my.que-*fangirls*
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
What...? : D
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Fluttershyisbest1932 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
sry..i fangirl every time the Writer or Artists responds….it makes me feel awesome inside….awesome….like UUUUUUUU!!! <3
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Ohhhhh k? xD that's wonderful, cool story, bro.
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Fluttershyisbest1932 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
needs more ponies…..
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:iconfluttershyisbest1932:
Fluttershyisbest1932 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i can't stop crying…..i need a journal of Feels...
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BENdrowned492 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
im crying so hard. faaaack. but shat this is a good. no GREAT story. my new fav :3
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awww, rly? ^-^
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ShadowyCanadian Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student
That song makes me think of my dad cuz he died and i just balled my eyes out im sorry XC
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
aww, I'm so sorry to hear that.
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ShadowyCanadian Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student
Sorry for telling you that :(
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:iconsonamyfangirl6637:
SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
No no, it's alright, darlin'.
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ShadowyCanadian Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student
Okay thanks :,)
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Liliyan109 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
avril lavigne when youre gone. that song....i always sing it ..ok this part made tears come in my eyes ..
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
awww
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DemonicPandamonium Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
I feel so heartless ;-; All the comments are saying "too many feels!!" "Its making me cry!Waaaah! !" And im just here reading it like "Oh. Thats sad." It really is an amazing story though
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hey don't feel that way. You're not the only one who only thought of it as sad. It was my intention for it to be sad not feelz worthy though. Oh well. Thanks.
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DemonicPandamonium Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
I didnt know the song so i looked it up and now i see how perfectly that song fits into this
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah. I only chose it because it was the song I was listening to while writing this and I had no other ideas.
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DemonicPandamonium Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
FUCK!! Nevermind....I had to look up the song ;~;
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lil-LunaMoon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist
im crying this is soo sad and im listening to the song ben sing *crying*
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
awww that's the point though </3
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lil-LunaMoon Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist
i couldn't stop crying but now im good
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smoshyhamster123 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Awsome !! U are truely talanted!!
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you! :iconkyutsmileplz:
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smoshyhamster123 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
Your welcome
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fgsebr345 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Its very rare for a story to make me cry but this one does it no problem. Well done you have done what many have failed at you really are amazing.
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awww thank you so much! That means alot
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Toughgurrl Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013
I sang the part where BEN was singing. I almost started crying. T^T
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Aww
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
when you're gone by Avril Lavigne  god damn these feels *crys inside*
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You got it! :3 awwww ish oki.
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
where r my tissues wen i need them *still crying*
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Ish oki! ;A; Here! *hands you tissue box with fluffy kittens on it*
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
*uses kitten instead of tissue* thank you for the kittens
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
No problem. I'm here for comfort.
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Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I miss you by avril lavigne
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Death10281 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Writer
it just so sad to read this part and good story as wellWaaaah! :( (Sad) Crying Death the Kid EmoteFappy Cry :criesthrust: 
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SonamyFangirl6637 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Awwww dun crai ;A; thx btw
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xXIlluminatedOfWCXx Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
DEMFUCKINFEELS :iconcryforeverplz: 
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